Ignite presentation learner response

Ignite Learner Response

Teacher comments 

• Nice opening - uses images on slides really well 
• Good comments on representation of London and the general feel of video 
• I like the use of images rather than text-heavy slides but there seems to be a lack of planning or rehearsal
• Lack of actual coverage of video - narrative, performance etc
• Shoe sponsorship aspect works and fits genre
• Quite a few slides don’t seem to add to details of concept/plan 
• Studio location is excellent - this will really help
• Field location not so sure - does that fit genre/ urban feel ?
• Editing points kind of works but lacks detail / specific elements
• Magazine needs to be original - can’t use existing one
• Audience addressed briefly towards and alongside industry you’ll need a lot more in these areas for your statement of intent
• Delivery reasonably confident but lacking the research and planning that needed to be part of the summer project

Q+A

• Question on mainstream - good point but answered well. One to cover in statement though.
• Nice question on locations - brings up some good questions.

2) Use this feedback, comments from peers and your own reflection on your presentation to self-assess and write your own detailed WWW and EBI for your coursework concept and presentation as a whole.

WWW: Good concept, confidence in speaking, Good narrative 

EBI: Lack of media terminology & theories and also lacks some key details in the magazine element of the presentation.

3) Write a paragraph discussing how your presentation will lead into your actual coursework production. Do you need to update your statement of intent? Does your concept offer enough clarity? Is it appropriate for the audience specified in the brief? Is it achievable to film with the resources you have available? Can you add media terminology or theory to your statement of intent now you have reflected on your presentation and seen others? 

My presentation will lead into my coursework as I have kept the same concept and genre of music. My concept has a clear narrative and is simple to understand. My concept is appropriate for my audience as I have made my concept revolve around the masses and the people age group who it is targeted at.  My music video is achievable to be filmed with the current resources. The only issue i may have is if I decide to include a studio in my video it may not be guaranteed i am able to with my resources at the moment.